Don't Touch Me!!!
(Green Eyes A'Blazing)
You Fucker!
You Liar!
My instincts are NEVER wrong...
Your words mean Nothing!
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Boy, that Shadorma is a volatile little thing...
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29 comments:
Rockin' the Spanish Shadorma? G-Man, your talent range is beyond expansive.
Ouch that one is sizzling!!!!!!!!!!!!
well you certainly brought the intensity with this one g!!!
whoaaa! I like listening to arguments (I'm nosy) haha... very nice write
They sure don't sound like a happy couple, no matter the style of poem.
Boy you have a KNACK fcor this m-m-my shadorma stuff, G Man!
Hmmmn, I think I may actually have uttered those exact words once. While reading them from a Woody Allen script, of course. :)
xoox
Ouch and ouch. Those of us with our sometime siren personas can relate to this.... a lovely riposte to the cultural phenom of the woman on the make...xxxj
Sounds like a sticky situation, dude -- so volatile it turned Tuesday into Wednesday.:-)
Hmmm...I wonder if she gets the message. Well said.I wrote about a bad relationship too. Not a Shardorma, or even a 55 for that matter!
dangerous interesting image!
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don't piss off a green-eyed girl!
Sounds like he's busted!
Amazing G-Man !!
I like the green eyes :)
You're a syllable short according to my syllable counter...you have 25 when Shadorma calls for 26
3/
5/
3/
3/
7/
5
Just saying...function beats form every time.
Mark, you had better throw away that abacus son...I'm dead on according to MY G-Man syllable counter!
But thanks for visiting..:-)
if looks could kill....
What a cool pic! And I'm glad to see you turnin on the shadorma with both burners here. And a completely original take.
You captured the intensity in that eye brilliantly, Galen!
Wasn't that a song by The Knack in the 80's - "My Shardorma"?
So tight! Liked this!
finding dreams for you
Yes Bubba....
And one of the members of that group was Dr. Kevorkian's infamous attorney, Jeffrey Feiger's BROTHER!!
(Just in case you are ever on Jeopardy)
Yikes. Her words mean something though! He best RUN!
What is Shadroma???
galen please come and see a school picture of mine at my blog!
Ouch! Green is for fire, I guess? A remarkable one shot!
Yowza! What did you do to her? Better just back away before anyone gets hurt G.
g-man...wow, i;m new to one stop wednesday, spent a lot of time visiting the many poets' contributions, but you've truly lit up my day...i love the way you approach pen and paper with open arms and no limitations...your freedom inspires many who have commented here...i enjoyed your photos and the bits and pieces of your life you have kindly shared with all...i look forward to your vivid honesty in bright poetic shades of passion...love the green eyes telling it like it is...your writing overflowing with life...pleasure to meet you...
damn...nice take on the form..here I thought form meant being all proper... ha!
good stuff g-man...reminded me of willie nelson plucking his old guitar and singing "green eyes frying on my brain..."
hey!
my instincts are NEVER wrong...
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