I remember...We were flying low,
and hit something in the air.
The girl...Is laying there beside me,
and on her face is such a distant stare.
Liquid warmth, is flowing from my body.
Life is oozing out, with my blood.
The attendant kneels down and whispers softly,
"Sorry, there's no chance for you...."
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If you or anyone you know has written a Friday Flash 55, please come tell the G-Man. I will visit, read, enjoy, comment ...then BOOK!!!
Special thanks to Jim Rutelidge for helping inspire this morbid offering.
Have a Spooky Weekend...
Peace...!!!
25 comments:
Ooooo, spooky one. But then, 'tis the season. That reminds me of some morbid old song along the same lines, the name of which escapes me. Wishing you a spooky weekend, too.:)
Wow, I hadn't even thought of that song in ten or fifteen years. I may have to buy the album off of amazon.
Thanks for the reminder, g-man!
Song? This is reminiscent of a song? Either way, I love the imagery, G. Great job!
-smarmoofus
oohh morbid, I like it! Awesome 55 G-man. ;-)
yikes. well, fits this time of yr, i guess. LOL i'm up...early, too. w00t! holla! lmao
Oh me likey. Mine's up
Bloodrock! Who remembers them? And Serena, the song was called "DOA". Haven't heard that song in ages.
Mine actually published last night, but I was dead asleep when it did. Too many late nights editing photos (or taking them) this week. But never fear...
55 Flash Fiction Friday #17: Yaadein (I)
PS: I think I have an MP3 of that song around here somewhere... Pretty sure of it actually...
Have a fantastic weekend!!!!
Yup... I was right. I do have it.
OH! That is a great 55, Galen. I actually had a chance to participate this week as well. :D
yikes. sounds like something a different james we know might write! good one though , gman, very clear images there.
Boooooooooooooooooo!
That is one serious 55!
Mine's up.
Have a bloodless weekend, dear Sir!
This is more sad than spooky to me. It somehow exudes a kind of helpless pain. I like the pun in the last sentence. It is loaded!
My simple 55ve is up!
I think this can fit in nicely with this time of year. It feels almost halloweenish to me in ways. Nice changeup G.
Gaaaa! Good one for the season of the Witch...
Spooky inDEED!
I've played, a bit late, but played nonetheless.
HUGS...
That was sad and shit..
BTW. I've seen your house...
That's a song? How sad. :(
Mine's up
Sniff, sniff, now look what you've done!!!!!
getting into the spirit I see...ohh
Trick or Treat! ;)
I got my 55 up...have a great weekend!
Well, that gives me the creeps. Good time for it, huh! Nice, Galen. I also like the recipe below. May have to try that. What oven setting?
Okay. Mine is up!! Donnetta
You know you like it..
SO DONT COMPLAIN BIZATCH!
Thanks everyone that either visited or played on Friday...
Y'all Rock!!!
My 55 from Friday is up. Apparently I botched the comment where I linked to it ... sorry!
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