Like the Sun on the trees you learned to love me.
Like a leaf on a breeze you blew away.
The birds fly South against the Darkened sky.
My life will be forever Autumn.
Cause you're not here...
Is it Sunday? Can you write Micro-Fiction in 160
characters EXACTLY? Yes? Then post one on your blog
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19 comments:
wow getting a little poetic there pops...feel the loss and longing...i rather like autumn...
That is so sweet and heartfelt. We both got struck by the Autumn sky today. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160, G.
That's really lovely, G-Man!
Such sweet words.
Whoa - a touch of the Justin Hayward's here? Very lyrical!
Jamie
That's very beautiful.
Well, that's a melancholy start to a Sunday! :(
I really like straightforward feelings. They don't have to be ironed flat- Just is refreshing.
Thanks.
wistful and yearning. it makes that picture look so much more haunting.
Cheat! I know someone with that for a ring tone.
So sad, G-man.
Sad yet beautiful. Nicely done.
Awwwwww, who knew you had such a sweet side, G-Man?
This was beautiful. I'm proud of you.
What a sad sentiment. Ultimately we all move on in one way or another.
Look at G-Man, getting his poet on!
Oh, Galen, I love your sensitive side.
Autumn, autumn, the saddest season.
xoxo
Fabulous poem. I think is impossible not to fall in love when a person dedicate this to you... don't you think?
Fabulous poem. I think is impossible not to fall in love when a person dedicate this to you... don't you think?
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