Saturday, October 22, 2011

Sunday 160...




Like the Sun on the trees you learned to love me.
Like a leaf on a breeze you blew away.
The birds fly South against the Darkened sky.
My life will be forever Autumn.
Cause you're not here...


Is it Sunday? Can you write Micro-Fiction in 160
characters EXACTLY? Yes? Then post one on your blog
and go visit The Monkey Man....Here!

19 comments:

Brian Miller said...

wow getting a little poetic there pops...feel the loss and longing...i rather like autumn...

Monkey Man said...

That is so sweet and heartfelt. We both got struck by the Autumn sky today. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160, G.

Mama Zen said...

That's really lovely, G-Man!

A Daft Scots Lass said...

Such sweet words.

mylittlewordz said...

Whoa - a touch of the Justin Hayward's here? Very lyrical!

Jamie

Ofira Sephiroth said...

That's very beautiful.

secret agent woman said...

Well, that's a melancholy start to a Sunday! :(

izzy said...

I really like straightforward feelings. They don't have to be ironed flat- Just is refreshing.
Thanks.

lime said...

wistful and yearning. it makes that picture look so much more haunting.

MorningAJ said...

Cheat! I know someone with that for a ring tone.

Alice Audrey said...

So sad, G-man.

Mijayami said...

Sad yet beautiful. Nicely done.

Helen said...

Awwwwww, who knew you had such a sweet side, G-Man?

Enchanted Oak said...

This was beautiful. I'm proud of you.

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

What a sad sentiment. Ultimately we all move on in one way or another.

Eric 'Bubba' Alder said...

Look at G-Man, getting his poet on!

Jannie Funster said...

Oh, Galen, I love your sensitive side.

Autumn, autumn, the saddest season.

xoxo

generic cialis said...

Fabulous poem. I think is impossible not to fall in love when a person dedicate this to you... don't you think?

generic cialis said...

Fabulous poem. I think is impossible not to fall in love when a person dedicate this to you... don't you think?