Saturday, November 5, 2011

Sunday 160.....




(Translated from French)
I'm still alive!!
I'm still alive!!
God help me Please!
I can't feel my legs!
I can't feel my arms!
I can't feel my body!
The crowd is cheering.
They hate me
They hate me...
Bless me Father for I have sinned...
(Fade to black...)

Is it Sunday? Can you write Micro-Fiction using
only 160 Characters? Yes? Then post it on your
Blog and go visit The Monkey Man....Here!

16 comments:

secret agent woman said...

Yikes!

secret agent woman said...
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secret agent woman said...

Imaginiff!

Brian Miller said...

cut the head off the snake, but watch out it can still bite you for a bit...

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

I've often wondered....

Monkey Man said...

That's one long dying breath. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.

mylittlewordz said...

Nice one! They say headless chickend run around for a while so why not...
Jamie

izzy said...

My My, such an interesting take!
Very clever- Thanks!

PattiKen said...

Argh, gruesome. On the other hand, he probably had it coming.

MorningAJ said...

Urgh! Gruesome!

Akelamalu said...

If you can keep your head when all about you are losing theirs...... ooops too late! ;)

lime said...

yikes!

The Cello Strings said...

A bold and powerful 160.
Enjoyed the sentiments.

Mama Zen said...

This is the funniest damn thing ever!

G-Man said...

Mama Zen...
It twernt supposed to be Funny!
Unless you are a Necrophile....

Craig said...

Very evocative. . .