Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Haiku Wednesday.....




Dazed...In a Green Fog.
What makes the Heart grow fonder?
He can't remember....



Is it Wednesday? Do you Haiku? Yes?
Then post one on your blog, and go visit Jenn at..
Sensational Haiku Wednesday!!
This weeks theme is....."Absence".
(Shhhhh...Haikus can be Punny)

26 comments:

PattiKen said...

I totally got it, G. Some say absinthe, some say Versed. The fog is just as dense, no?

PattiKen said...

And hey, look at that. Yahtzee! First time ever.

lime said...

clever as always. the green fairy, isn't she the green hornet's sidekick?

Cloudia said...

cool haiku and what a find the vert fairy!


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Brian Miller said...

someone has been having fun with green lanterns ring....

G-Man said...

...Let those that worship evils might, beware my power, Green Lantern's Light!!

Cathy Feaster said...

absence, absinthe...what's the difference? :)

Yvonne Osborne said...

One of these Wednesdays I shall join you in this but for now I just say bravo. Absinthe, the drug of choice for those Romantic poets.

Yvonne Osborne said...

One of these Wednesdays I shall join you in this but for now I just say bravo. Absinthe, the drug of choice for those Romantic poets.

Yvonne Osborne said...

One of these Wednesdays I shall join you in this but for now I just say bravo. Absinthe, the drug of choice for those Romantic poets.

Enchanted Oak said...

You are too punny for words, Galen. I'm speechless.

A Daft Scots Lass said...

In brightest day, in blackest night no evil will escape my sight

anthonynorth said...

And memories turned to dust. I like it.

the walking man said...
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the walking man said...

Not that it matters because it really doesn't but if you are going for 5-7-5 the last line has 6 syllables.

Let's be honest
Haiku is not commanded
by syllable count

TALON said...

Oh, those faeries - no matter the color, they are tricky little beasts! Especially the ones that come from a bottle :)

Helen said...

Yes, cool and quite clever! Cheers.

Anonymous said...

Bravo! LOved this one. :O)

Kathy Reed said...

You make a good point!

Mijayami said...

love it!

Susie Clevenger said...

Wonderful!! absence implied :)

Anonymous said...

Creative implication and use of prompt!

Unknown said...

Absinthe and a lovely fairy in a pool who needs to remember...

Other Mary said...

Oooh, I like this one very much! lol

Anonymous said...

the older we get the more we forget what we really love

Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog? said...

I don't agree with the walking man, even though I enjoyed his haiku :P I think the 5-7-5 should be a governing factor! (and your last line has the correct 5... not 6 - unless you changed it before I was able to visit???)

It's been a very long week.

Enjoyed your haiku, dude!