Sunday, January 2, 2011

Micro-Fiction Monday.....


.
Please try our grease from Texico
It's made right here in Mexico.
It's good for your Car
It's good for your Cheeks
It's good for your Hinges
It's good for your Squeeks!
.
.
Every Monday the lovely Susan from Stony River
posts a pic. You provide the caption in 140 characters
or less. Post it on your blog, and go tell her ....Here!
Try it, it's fun!

32 comments:

Pat said...

I love it! The rhyming scheme is wonderful and the context reminds me of an old Saturday Night Live sketch..."It's a floor polish! It's a dessert topping! It's a hair conditioner!" Excellent MM!

Diane said...

Hahahahahaha! Perfect in every way, just like you!!! :O)

5thsister said...

Shoot...yours is the 1st one I read and I'm thinking "Game Over". I don't see how anyone can compete with this!

Serena said...

Wow, the race is on -- 2 in one day! You've been a busy boy.

Susan Fobes said...

Okay, I started thinking the ad was talking about more than a car-LOL!

Sylvia K said...

Oh, what a hoot! I love it! You are so clever! Yep, can't compete with this one! Hope your new year is off to a great start -- it surely is here!!

Sylvia

Monkey Man said...

Original squaline no doubt.

MartyrMom said...

Pretty darn good!

Maria@BubblegumandDuctTape said...

too too funny, loved the rhyming.

Quilly said...

If it is good for my hinges and squeaks, maybe I should try it on my knees!

One Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artists said...

... and anything else that ails you

Clever as always Mr. G-Man

I guess we are off and running in 2011

Shadow said...

and you can slide right into the new year too.....

A Daft Scots Lass said...

You're so smooth you slide uphill. You don't need the assistance....

Grandma said...

Loved your little ditty. Perhaps you should go into advertising.

SparkleFarkle said...

This one needs no tweaking; it's perfect!

SparkleFarkle said...

P.S. to Mr. Knowitall:

I guess that means your other name is genius? Yep, I thought so!

izzy said...

Love the squeeks- so true! thanks.

Scott said...

now that's a jingle I can get into! (sorry I've been missed the past couple FF55s, internet access has been sparse while traveling for the Holidays!)

the walking man said...

All those years around grease and I was using whatever what cheapest. What could I have been thinking?

Akelamalu said...

LOL great poem G it fits the pic perfectly! :)

SouthLakesMom said...

Good job! Reminds me of the old days when ads needed to be catchy instead of edgy!

Mama Zen said...

Good one, G-Man!

Peggy said...

I love it too. Perfect MF for the picture, just perfect!

Madeleine said...

LOL! Excellent :O)

TALON said...

Blogger isn't liking me today...it keeps giving me error messages when I try to post a comment, but I'm not giving up!

This had me smiling, Galen. I loved the rhythm and the rhyme!

(We tend to keep WD 40 around for the squeeks, but we never thought of using it for cheeks - lol)

Brian Miller said...

hehe...just what every man needs...smiles.

Dianne said...

at my age I have a few squeeks, maybe I need some

great rhyme :)

Fay's Too said...

that one has me laughing. thanks, I needed that.

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Wonderful rhyme -- enjoyed it! Perfect take on the picture.

Jingle said...

lovely rhymes...

well done micro-fiction.
Happy 2011.
Happy Monday.

EG Wow said...

Yep, you all-purpose grease. :)

lime said...

dear lord, good for axles AND skin? i seriously doubt it!