Tuesday, July 27, 2010

One Shot Wednesday...

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The Full Moon reflects off of the rippling water.
Gently illuminating long, golden, perfect legs.
Red toes wiggle with delight on one end
Volcanic intensity erupts on the other.
Eruptions to quiet a day long ache.
Eruptions for her lover's sake.
Will the fever ever slake?
As long as two hearts beat as one...
There will be Lusting, Yearning, Passion....Fun!!!
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The very talented folks over at One Stop Poetry,
Hosts a fun little deal called One Shot Wednesday!
I'm very close to learning how to link up, so please be patient!
I'm certainly no poet, but Brian Miller and MoonDustWriter are such loyal supporters of Friday Flash 55, that I thought I'd better throw an entry or two their way.
Jeez, the next thing ya know I'll be doing Monkey Man's Sunday 160.
Oh well.........."Quid Pro Quo Clarice...Quid Pro Quo!"
Peace...!!!

36 comments:

Mona said...

Yahtzeeeeee!

Mona said...

I miss our James Goodman when I yahtzee! :(

Galen I have a birthday post for Mark at my blog, which you may like to read!

Mona said...

And you certainly know how to do better than THAT with poetic form!

G-Man said...

So what you are saying Mona that this SUCKED?

Spank You very much!

Brian Miller said...

yay! way to rock it g!
explosions eh? smiles.
sounds like a hot night tonight...
thanks for linking up to one shot!

Brian Miller said...

dont listen to her g...if you caused explosions your form is perfect...lol

moondustwriter said...

Bri - I am blushing
G- sounds like poetry to me - albeit sensuous

Thanks for posting on One Shot Wednesday

smiles from the Moon

dustus said...

Thanks for joining the One Shot party, G-Man. Appreciate you posting poetry. Excellent.

Mama Zen said...

Wow, G-Man! This is fantastic!

Ben Langhinrchs said...

Nice toes!

PattiKen said...

Ooohhh, very hot, G-Man!

Dianne said...

Wow, G-Man! Thanks for the Tuesday Toes! Mine is up!
Fab Di

Prayer Girl said...

Hey, I could have used your picture of toes in my Red and White blog. Then maybe if I added a wordless poem, I could play two games at once? :) Wait....I'm confusing myself.

Well, bottom line is I love your poem.

PG

TALON said...

Now THAT is a nice way to end a day :)

Gwei Mui said...

If you write the you are a "writer" you've written a poem so therfore you're a poet - even if you don't want to be!
"As long as two hearts beat as one...
There will be Lusting, Yearning, Passion....Fun!!!"
Fabulous please keep writing poems

Monkey Man said...

sultry. you even got the U2 song reference in there. Nice.

Akelamalu said...

You did a great job on that Galen!

Me said...

Where did you get that picture of my feet? ;)

Seriously, g-man, that was great stuff. Rated R, too. Nice! :)
-C

lime said...

quite the lusty bit of writing,g-man! nicely done :)

Tony Single said...

Hoo! Hot under the collar or what? Just gonna go and jump in a river now! :P

the walking man said...

The only thing I can say is I am glad I do not have a foot fetish G-man because you have lovely feet.

clean and crazy said...

great job g-man, hope to play friday!!

John's comments said...

hmm, pass me the nail varnish...I'll help get some more heat going... I do poetry for fun rather than publication so for this week only, I’ve nervously posted an example from each of my blogs: an Elegy from Scribbles and Diversions, a Gogyohka from Random Twitter Stories, and free verse poem from Random Short Stories.

Jessie said...

YES!!! YES!!!!

Fun there will be!!! lol lol

laughing smiles,

Jingle said...

you certainly have the talent on poetry,
beautiful writing here...
way 2 go!

Rajlakshmi said...

thats a nice one :) well written :)

Claudia said...

yeah - this rocks - and red toes wiggle with delight...

kkrige said...

Oi, hot stuff! I like it. :) Worth a wander down to the dock for that one, I'd say.

Felicitas said...

G-Man, this is HOT!!! You are a poet!

joanny said...

Ah summer love erupting and spewing all over the place like a volcano -- red, hot, poetry.

Nice work there G-Man.

Kavita said...
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Kavita said...

sensuous and sizzling! the perfect recipe for good poetry! neat one, this!

Kavita said...

sensuous and sizzling! the perfect recipe for good poetry! neat one, this!

S said...

You really do like feet...

Fireblossom said...

Very cool that you've joined the fun at One Stop, and indeed, Brian and Moonie are the ginchiest.

Pete Marshall said...

hi g-man and thanks for trying out One Shot and heck you did yourself proud...been away for a week so busy catching up and reading..good poem..cheers Pete