Thursday, January 28, 2010

Friday Flash 55.....




The small-time hood eyed his next mark.
She was Blonde. She was Leggy. She was Alone!
The rhythmic staccato of the short menacing steps that women in high heels make, now sounded hurried.
He prepared the attack...

Clutching the pistol in her pocket, she thought...
"Keep coming Mother-Fucker, I got something for you"!!!



If you or anyone you know has written a Friday Flash 55.
Please come tell The G-Man!
I will visit, read, enjoy, comment...Then BOOK!!!
So from the most gracious host from coast to coast,
Have A Kick Ass Week-End!!!

61 comments:

Susan said...

And I have something for you right I'm up right HERE

Olive oil G-Man? Interesting ;)

Dr.John said...

He is about to learn a lesson a bit too late.
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it
HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.

KB said...

Woohoo! Give him what he deserves lady.

Mine's up. Happy weekend G!

Fandango said...

You humans always killing each other.HERE.

Brian Miller said...

snap! that was a wicked 55 gman! guess he got what was coming to him.

mine is up!

Fandango said...

Woops we meant to say
Our is up
HERE.
Not the killing is here.

♥ Boomer ♥ said...

Whoa!

Mine's up. Have a happy weekend there.

buffalodick said...

Surprises come in many ways...

Ms Hen said...

omigosh.. I love this one.

You said so much.. in only 55 Words..

Hats off to you.. :)

Oh Master of the 55.

Betty Ann ..

Enjoy your weekend..

I'm going to write mine now..

Mojo said...

Heh. Reminds me of a Wordsmith's Challenge I wrote 'bout a year or so ago. There's something about that sound heels make on pavement isn't there?

I'm up!

Mojo said...

And because I just do this kind of thing, you can find Sandy's 55 Here.

And it's a good one too. (Like that would surprise anybody?)

Susan at Stony River said...

Get 'im, girl!

Nicely done, those staccato heels foreshadowing the sound that's coming next -- ooooo, yes!

Mine's up right here, and I'll be back in a few hours when Thom's story comes up, 'cause he's playing too.

secret agent woman said...

Good Lord. How about something a little less lethal, like pepper spray?

Chef Kar said...

Holy Moly ~ gotta love a girl packing heat :-) [You said the "MF" word - nice going GMan].

You'll find mine here...with an added request to pray for my son and anyone you know in need:

Friday Flash 55 ~ Wounded Bird

Peter Stone said...

Set me up nicely, g-man, with that ending. Though I've got to go with the 'pepper spray' comment, after all, only a 'small time hood.'

My 55 is HERE

Mama Zen said...

Take that, punk!

I'll get mine up in the morning (if we still have power)!

Ocean Girl said...

This Friday Flash thingy you have is a great weekend kick-off.

G-Man said...

People....PEOPLE!!!
It's FICTION!!

Ms Hen said...

I cheated. I took an excerpt of a longer poem I wrote in 2003.

I had a busy day.. but this was fun.. taking a small portion from something long.

Thanks for the 55.. in recovery I'm learning i don't have to be so serious..and can do things just for fun.

Betty Ann (hugs)

clean and crazy said...

that is awesome!! mine is up too!!

well i tried but i can't link up!! just for fun;
HERE!

Janna said...

Dark and menacing with a hint of impending justice!
I like it!

My own Friday 55 is posted right HERE.

Alice Audrey said...

I've got a whole series of science fiction stories that run along those lines.

Mine is here.

Cindy said...

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Serena said...

A woman in control. Yes!!

P.S. -- Is it Friday already? Dang!

Felicitas said...

That's right... watch out for those leggy blondes!

My 55 is up, too.

C.M. Jackson said...

g--here's looking at you albeit through a blankin snowstorm! c

smarmoofus said...

Guns make me nervous, but I do admire a woman who can take care of herself. Go, Blondy!

I'm up, finally!
-smarmoofus

Larry said...

hhmmmmmm glad I'm not him and I would never do anything like that anyway I hope she blows his jewels off. I'm up and posted just follow the link provided below.
Sweetest Of Sorrows
hope you all enjoy this one I've been thinking about this one all week.

anthonynorth said...

A great edgy tale, that. Just as I like them.
You'll find mine here.

Susan at Stony River said...

Okay, Thom's is up and it's right here.

(I can't believe I woke up at 8am to do this. I'm going back to bed now... will visit everybody in a few hours and after coffee, can't wait!!)

Roxy said...

Yea baby, bring it on... I like this Mr G :)

Mine is up sweetie! But I don't yet know how to post the link to it here... so just come see me, ok?

Dianne said...

I'm with Ms Hen. It isn't cheating to take an earlier work and shorten it.
mine is up. HERE

HAKAWE
Fab Di

SandyCarlson said...

Her back story would likely show she is Clint Eastwood's other personality.

I liked this a lot. I could hear those menacing footsteps.

Eaton Bennett said...

Hi Galen, She's a tough cookie, I don't think he's ready for her...smirk

It's good to be back, my girls go back to school Monday, and I think that must be inspirational! :))

the walking man said...

Right on babe!

Uiscebot said...

I'm new to this - came via Stony River. Here's my offering

http://theblogsthejob.blogspot.com/2010/01/blog-post.html

lime said...

good for her! nicely done as always g-man!

i played this week.

Jessie said...

very well done :-)
mine is up!

sarah said...

True power!!!! A woman ready to strike...

G-Man said...

It's off to work for The G-Man folks, carry on with the stories, and I'll be back later on tonight.
Thanks For Playing...

Hootin' Anni said...

My 55 is posted.
HERE Below my Show n Tell as always ---not really much 'fiction' to it this week...kinda lame. :o)

hope said...

Just because you have long legs, doesn't mean you don't have brains...or weaponry. :) Nice one!

Mine's up. Check the rest of you later.

Prayer Girl said...

I loved the "rhythmic staccato of the short menacing steps" - loved that turn of phrase.

Very compact 55 delivering a swift punchline just like that little compact pistol hiding in her pocket that will also deliver. :)

Loved this g-man.

Mine is up.
PG

Nessa said...

Oh, I like it. Very edgy. Will she blow his brains out or will they have a passionate affair?

Getting Reacquainted in 55

Jadey said...

Hey there G that was great atleast she was aware and one step ahead of him lol. Have a great weekend and mine is up.

Lou said...

Adding a few words to your 55--

"Do you feel lucky, punk?"

JStar said...

I WROTE MY FIRST 55! Check me out...

I LOVE this one man...My 55 sounds like garbage compared to your :) I feel her tho...

Doctor FTSE said...
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Doctor FTSE said...

WOW! Some number of entries!

Mine is HERE

Titanium said...

Ah, a girl after my own heart.

Mine's up.

schererart said...

This is so good!!!! Powerful. You are brilliant!

Mines up.

Akannie said...

Yea, baby...that's what I'm talking about..a woman about to turn the tables...

Mine's UP!!!

Titanium said...

Zee linky-loo...over at Element22.

Realliveman said...

Awesome 55 G-Man. I'm back in the game. I was the old Mike's Homefront. Now I'm www.realiveman.com.

I'm going to start 55ing again. I look forward to your great ones.

Mike

G-Man said...

Great Turn-Out this week everybody. Thank You one and all!
And I'm whoring myself out to be the 55th Comment!!
Yay Me!!!!

Tall Kay said...

Just came by to say hi and thank you for doing the same. Things should settle down again for me after next week. I sure miss flashing with you guys. This is one of your best 55's if I may say so myself. Have a lovely weekend Mr. G.

Prats said...

awesome !!!! liked it :)


mine is here : http://talentishere.blogspot.com/2010/01/scary-feelings.html

Kathleen said...

Jeepers! Creepers!
Well done, G-Man!

Here's mine; better late than never:
http://inlindenhills.blogspot.com/2010/01/flash-fiction-friday-uh-oh.html

Hobbes said...

Good one.

otin said...

Very cool Mr G! I wrote one and posted it but did not allow comments! Next week!

Larry said...

I thought this was a gret 55 galen I came back to read it again .. loved it .. here is a wordzzle Challenge I did last night I think you'd like it this is why I'm posting it so you can decide if you want to read or not. Thanks for being such a great host...


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Thanks for your comments also Galen I appreciate them and look forward to themas always .