Flailing about like a spastic marionette,
she was powerless under the vice-like grip clutching her throut.
Nostrils flaring... Eyes of unbridled rage!
Cheap whiskey and FEAR were the only smells present!
"Why me"...She thought
(fading)
"Oh God".....She knew him!!!!!!!
Yesterday...
Late for work...
Ran over neighbors dog...
Didn't stop...
(fade to black)
Happy Halloween Everybody!!!
If you or anyone you know has written a Friday Flash 55...
Please come tell The G-Man!
I will visit, read, enjoy, comment, haunt you, Then BOOK!!
So from the most eerie host from coast to coast....
Have a safe and Fun-Filled Week-End...
BOO!!!!!
66 comments:
Wow! He was that angry. Must have been a very special dog.
Our 55 is up
HERE.
Leave a comment on ours and we will leave one on yours. Dragon
Promise.
wow. people are pretty attached to pets...almost like children to some...i could see it. nicely done gman!
mine is up!
YIKES!!!!!!
Mine's up, too! Have a great weekend there, my friend...despite the dead dog in the neighborhood.
http://boomerbabybliss-bfs.blogspot.com/2009/10/flash-55-fiction_29.html
Holy crap, this isn't a TRUE story is it??
Is the dog ok?
I did a Halloween one too, and it's up, right here.
HAPPY HALLOWEEN GALEN AND EVERYONE!
I love my dogs, but I wouldn't resort to chocking...maybe a little arsenic! :D I'm up!!
Poor puppy! And shame on her for not stopping. Sometimes you have good cause to be late for work. *feisty*
I'm up, too!
-smarmoofus
A great Halloween 55.
Mine is up.
PG
HAPPY FLASH FICTION DAY EVERYBODY!!!!!!!!!!!! That was a great one G!
Mine is up here if you want to take a look. I think it's great how I can sit down and just write anything that pops into my head.
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!
Came from Brian's. Amazing what you do with 55 words.
Such a frightening 55 ~ and on Hallowscream weekend!
You'll find my 55 ~ Skipping Stones is posted.
Have a good one, Galen and all.
~Karis
A little vigilantism going here?
Mine is here.
Geez, G! I had to put my hand over my puppy's eyes. She'd have had nightmares for a week. Well done!
you kill my dog I will kill you back.
what? They couldn't just talk it over with some BBQ puppy? (joking of course)
Mine will be up at midnight Pacific time of course. ;-)
Yikes!
This is why I always keep my cats indoors. :)
BTW, Hi! I'm joining the crowd of Flash-55-ers, and my very first one is here!
Woah...that was on mean ass 55 but so appropriate. Mine is up HERE. Happy Halloween. :)
Help! I can hardly breath with those strong hands around my neck...Ghaaaaaaah!
Mine is up. But it is not a happy one this time. Sorry!
Next time, enthusiastic and HAPPY and FREE and ALIVE!
My very first try here! I don't know if mine's ok... ;)
I will do my best to check out everyone's 55's, enjoying some of them already...
Now that is what I call a pet lover!! Have a great Halloween.
Mine is up. Still don't know how to put the link up on my comments...ugh.
damn, this is harsh... mine's up too.
Great one, Galen! Perfect picture, too. I'm gonna watch my back this weekend, I tell you. You just put the fear of something in me!
Here's mine:
http://inlindenhills.blogspot.com/2009/10/flash-fiction-friday-mom.html
oooohh puppy puppy ... poor thing.
You are great at this gMAN i always told you.
Mine is UP
Happy Halloween
to you and everyone
Dulce
Now that is drastic action.
You'll find mine here.
Nikki, sprawled across the the table, called out the shot, "eight ball, corner pocket." You couldn't help but notice her with those nice smooth legs covered in fish net nylons. Her nicely rounded tush was posed over the railing with that come hither look. She liked her suds with a few games, especially on Sundays.
Hope this don't offend any of the women who follow this blog. It's just a story I thought of and made it a Friday Flash 55.
A Flash 55 Here
I am hear the music from the Psycho shower scene as we speak. She got what she deserved. :)
Flash 55 - Morbid Norberth
Scary! Great one. Thank you for the 55 entertainment as always, G-man and you have a boo-full weekend. Just a 55 observer this week. :)
I hope this ends her days of dog killing.
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it
HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.
BOO!!!!!
Have a terrorific Halloween tomorrow---
My 55 is a two-parter this week...
Trick or Treats HERE
Guns take less energy.
http://weandwords.blogspot.com/2009/10/she.html
my another try at 55 fiction !
oh yeah! that's my kind of 55, Galen. :D
I have one posted as well...
WOW, that was... wow
Mines up too :)
Oh my, what a wicked mind you have, G-man. Nicely done.
I've posted a 55 as well.
yikes! some kinda retribution there!
i'm up with my own brand of retribution. ;)
OMG! 32 already and it isnt even 8 o'clock!
I felt sorry for her till I learned WHY! LOL ~;oD
You have a SPOOOK-tacular weekend!
ok, my link was messed up so just click my picture LOL I am in a hurry and keep messing up! AAAA TGIF~
I will get out and read every one this evening!
That's, um, kind of horrible.
That what I call taking matters into your own hands! I didn't play this week, but I LOVE to read 'em! Happy Halloween Mr. G.!
Mine is up :) Great 55! Way to freak me out this morning :)
Oh that's spooky...and somehow connected to my 55, which is now up.
Have an enchanting weekend! :)
Sweet! A great Halloween 55. I made time for you this week!
Vincent
I think she should have at least apologized for running the guys dog over, that might have saved her. Very nice Halloween writing, Galen.
It's way passed midnight here, so I will visit over the weekend. Have a great weekend, G-Man
i'm glad this was a Halloween post. you let the person off easy...
oh ... mine's up.
Yikes he needs anger management lol. Hey there G. I have been a slacker for two weeks but I am back. I hope you have a fantastic weekend. Mine is up and I hope everyone will come to read. I will be catching up on blogs this weekend. Now its off to clean I have a bunch of teens invading my house starting tonight for a Halloween/Bday party that is extending to tomorrow. Calgon take me away. Ciao and hugs.
I'd say she had it coming! Very creative 55, Mr. K.
Mine is up now for all to see.
She must live in Detroit..
My 55 is up. Yours is a good ghoulish tale. Happy Halloween!
Chris A
Halloween seems to bring out the spooky and mysterious in all of us. My 55 is posted HERE.
Have a frightfully great Halloween, Galen! :))
Will she fess up to her neighbour?
Good one G-man. :)
Mine's up too. x
Galen: Hey, we sort of were on the same wave length. You're right! Well, great minds...D
Happy--(or maybe not so happy for Little Miss Dog Killer) Friday!
May you never run over anyone's dog.
--snow
Love me, you dam well better love my dog!
That neighbors dog sure had rabies...she got all those signs
Happy Halloween!
Don't mess with the dog.
Here's a skeleton from my family closet:
WHAT A WITCH - BEWITCHING
cool site. love this. I just posted on www.gentlerecovery.blogspot.com
She had it coming. Awesome G-Man!
Mine is up.
Yes, us pet owners without kids are VERY attached to our pets....
This pos is a little over 55 . . . but still fun. . . . and for a good cause.
GLANCING AT PRANCING – BALLY-HUE – THE PRANCING CAROUSELS
Hi Everybody...
WOW, what a GREAT turnout today!
I' was very busy at work today, and I'm stepping out tonight for a bit. But ALL 55's will be answered!
Be patient..You All Rock!!
See you sometime in a short minute!
dam scarey story Galen I have a brother that would probably do the same he loves his dogs and really gets out of hand when you dis his dogs lol..
Thanks for stopping by This Blog Of Mine and look forward to even more in the future..
Thanks again Gman.
Did I miss anybody's 55?
Great, scary 55, the girl screaming goes great with the story.
Here is mine.
http://connieemeraldeyez.blogspot.com/2009/10/friday-flash-55_31.html
By the way, I left you something at PG Grows up. When you have a minute, busy guy, come on over....
BOO!.....
....hoo!
You're so funny, especially after a couple shots o the gentlemen jack and a trip out to the trash barrel.
That pepperoni pizza looks fantastic believe it or not even hippie chicks like pepperoni pizza!
I really enjoy saving it all up and coming here once a week to scroll down the page to all the wonders...
Happy Halloweeen Gmannnnnn!
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