Thursday, October 29, 2009

Friday Flash 55.....



Flailing about like a spastic marionette,
she was powerless under the vice-like grip clutching her throut.
Nostrils flaring... Eyes of unbridled rage!
Cheap whiskey and FEAR were the only smells present!
"Why me"...She thought
(fading)
"Oh God".....She knew him!!!!!!!
Yesterday...
Late for work...
Ran over neighbors dog...
Didn't stop...
(fade to black)



Happy Halloween Everybody!!!
If you or anyone you know has written a Friday Flash 55...
Please come tell The G-Man!
I will visit, read, enjoy, comment, haunt you, Then BOOK!!
So from the most eerie host from coast to coast....
Have a safe and Fun-Filled Week-End...
BOO!!!!!

66 comments:

Fandango said...

Wow! He was that angry. Must have been a very special dog.

Our 55 is up

HERE.

Leave a comment on ours and we will leave one on yours. Dragon
Promise.

Brian Miller said...

wow. people are pretty attached to pets...almost like children to some...i could see it. nicely done gman!

mine is up!

♥ Boomer ♥ said...

YIKES!!!!!!

Mine's up, too! Have a great weekend there, my friend...despite the dead dog in the neighborhood.

http://boomerbabybliss-bfs.blogspot.com/2009/10/flash-55-fiction_29.html

Susan at Stony River said...

Holy crap, this isn't a TRUE story is it??

Is the dog ok?

I did a Halloween one too, and it's up, right here.

HAPPY HALLOWEEN GALEN AND EVERYONE!

Lulda Casadaga said...

I love my dogs, but I wouldn't resort to chocking...maybe a little arsenic! :D I'm up!!

smarmoofus said...

Poor puppy! And shame on her for not stopping. Sometimes you have good cause to be late for work. *feisty*

I'm up, too!
-smarmoofus

Prayer Girl said...

A great Halloween 55.

Mine is up.

PG

Mr. O said...

HAPPY FLASH FICTION DAY EVERYBODY!!!!!!!!!!!! That was a great one G!

Mine is up here if you want to take a look. I think it's great how I can sit down and just write anything that pops into my head.

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!

Pseudonymous High School Teacher said...

Came from Brian's. Amazing what you do with 55 words.

Chef Kar said...

Such a frightening 55 ~ and on Hallowscream weekend!

You'll find my 55 ~ Skipping Stones is posted.

Have a good one, Galen and all.

~Karis

Alice Audrey said...

A little vigilantism going here?


Mine is here.

Serena said...

Geez, G! I had to put my hand over my puppy's eyes. She'd have had nightmares for a week. Well done!

myrtle beached whale said...

you kill my dog I will kill you back.

MomsJournal said...

what? They couldn't just talk it over with some BBQ puppy? (joking of course)

Mine will be up at midnight Pacific time of course. ;-)

Janna said...

Yikes!
This is why I always keep my cats indoors. :)

BTW, Hi! I'm joining the crowd of Flash-55-ers, and my very first one is here!

Thom said...

Woah...that was on mean ass 55 but so appropriate. Mine is up HERE. Happy Halloween. :)

Steve E. said...

Help! I can hardly breath with those strong hands around my neck...Ghaaaaaaah!

Mine is up. But it is not a happy one this time. Sorry!

Next time, enthusiastic and HAPPY and FREE and ALIVE!

fickleinpink said...

My very first try here! I don't know if mine's ok... ;)

I will do my best to check out everyone's 55's, enjoying some of them already...

Mom of Opiate Addict said...

Now that is what I call a pet lover!! Have a great Halloween.

Mine is up. Still don't know how to put the link up on my comments...ugh.

Shadow said...

damn, this is harsh... mine's up too.

Kathleen said...

Great one, Galen! Perfect picture, too. I'm gonna watch my back this weekend, I tell you. You just put the fear of something in me!

Here's mine:
http://inlindenhills.blogspot.com/2009/10/flash-fiction-friday-mom.html

Dulce said...

oooohh puppy puppy ... poor thing.
You are great at this gMAN i always told you.
Mine is UP
Happy Halloween
to you and everyone
Dulce

anthonynorth said...

Now that is drastic action.

You'll find mine here.

Larry said...

Nikki, sprawled across the the table, called out the shot, "eight ball, corner pocket." You couldn't help but notice her with those nice smooth legs covered in fish net nylons. Her nicely rounded tush was posed over the railing with that come hither look. She liked her suds with a few games, especially on Sundays.

Hope this don't offend any of the women who follow this blog. It's just a story I thought of and made it a Friday Flash 55.

A Flash 55 Here

Nessa said...

I am hear the music from the Psycho shower scene as we speak. She got what she deserved. :)

Flash 55 - Morbid Norberth

Lynn said...

Scary! Great one. Thank you for the 55 entertainment as always, G-man and you have a boo-full weekend. Just a 55 observer this week. :)

Dr.John said...

I hope this ends her days of dog killing.

I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it

HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.

Hootin' Anni said...

BOO!!!!!

Have a terrorific Halloween tomorrow---

My 55 is a two-parter this week...

Trick or Treats HERE

the walking man said...

Guns take less energy.

PS : De-abbreviate as you like ;) said...

http://weandwords.blogspot.com/2009/10/she.html


my another try at 55 fiction !

James Goodman said...

oh yeah! that's my kind of 55, Galen. :D

I have one posted as well...

Jess Mistress of Mischief said...

WOW, that was... wow

Mines up too :)

Jayme Malvagio said...

Oh my, what a wicked mind you have, G-man. Nicely done.

I've posted a 55 as well.

boots said...
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lime said...

yikes! some kinda retribution there!

i'm up with my own brand of retribution. ;)

boots said...

OMG! 32 already and it isnt even 8 o'clock!
I felt sorry for her till I learned WHY! LOL ~;oD

You have a SPOOOK-tacular weekend!

ok, my link was messed up so just click my picture LOL I am in a hurry and keep messing up! AAAA TGIF~
I will get out and read every one this evening!

secret agent woman said...

That's, um, kind of horrible.

Tall Kay said...

That what I call taking matters into your own hands! I didn't play this week, but I LOVE to read 'em! Happy Halloween Mr. G.!

Rachel said...

Mine is up :) Great 55! Way to freak me out this morning :)

hope said...

Oh that's spooky...and somehow connected to my 55, which is now up.

Have an enchanting weekend! :)

pheromone girl said...

Sweet! A great Halloween 55. I made time for you this week!

Vincent

Eaton Bennett said...

I think she should have at least apologized for running the guys dog over, that might have saved her. Very nice Halloween writing, Galen.

It's way passed midnight here, so I will visit over the weekend. Have a great weekend, G-Man

Jessie said...

i'm glad this was a Halloween post. you let the person off easy...

oh ... mine's up.

Jadey said...

Yikes he needs anger management lol. Hey there G. I have been a slacker for two weeks but I am back. I hope you have a fantastic weekend. Mine is up and I hope everyone will come to read. I will be catching up on blogs this weekend. Now its off to clean I have a bunch of teens invading my house starting tonight for a Halloween/Bday party that is extending to tomorrow. Calgon take me away. Ciao and hugs.

Felicitas said...

I'd say she had it coming! Very creative 55, Mr. K.

Mine is up now for all to see.

Lou said...

She must live in Detroit..

enchantedoak said...

My 55 is up. Yours is a good ghoulish tale. Happy Halloween!
Chris A

Monkey Man said...

Halloween seems to bring out the spooky and mysterious in all of us. My 55 is posted HERE.

petra michelle; Whose role is it anyway? said...

Have a frightfully great Halloween, Galen! :))

Akelamalu said...

Will she fess up to her neighbour?

Good one G-man. :)

Mine's up too. x

Donnetta Lee said...

Galen: Hey, we sort of were on the same wave length. You're right! Well, great minds...D

snowelf said...

Happy--(or maybe not so happy for Little Miss Dog Killer) Friday!

May you never run over anyone's dog.

--snow

buffalodick said...

Love me, you dam well better love my dog!

Mona said...

That neighbors dog sure had rabies...she got all those signs

Happy Halloween!

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

Don't mess with the dog.

Here's a skeleton from my family closet:

WHAT A WITCH - BEWITCHING

sarah said...

cool site. love this. I just posted on www.gentlerecovery.blogspot.com

Mama Zen said...

She had it coming. Awesome G-Man!

Mine is up.

jillie said...

Yes, us pet owners without kids are VERY attached to our pets....

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

This pos is a little over 55 . . . but still fun. . . . and for a good cause.

GLANCING AT PRANCING – BALLY-HUE – THE PRANCING CAROUSELS

G-Man said...

Hi Everybody...
WOW, what a GREAT turnout today!
I' was very busy at work today, and I'm stepping out tonight for a bit. But ALL 55's will be answered!
Be patient..You All Rock!!
See you sometime in a short minute!

Larry said...

dam scarey story Galen I have a brother that would probably do the same he loves his dogs and really gets out of hand when you dis his dogs lol..

Thanks for stopping by This Blog Of Mine and look forward to even more in the future..
Thanks again Gman.

G-Man said...

Did I miss anybody's 55?

Connie said...

Great, scary 55, the girl screaming goes great with the story.

Here is mine.
http://connieemeraldeyez.blogspot.com/2009/10/friday-flash-55_31.html

pheromone girl said...

By the way, I left you something at PG Grows up. When you have a minute, busy guy, come on over....

Mona said...

BOO!.....





....hoo!

S said...

You're so funny, especially after a couple shots o the gentlemen jack and a trip out to the trash barrel.

That pepperoni pizza looks fantastic believe it or not even hippie chicks like pepperoni pizza!

I really enjoy saving it all up and coming here once a week to scroll down the page to all the wonders...


Happy Halloweeen Gmannnnnn!