Monday, October 29, 2012

No Prompt Poetry.....



NECROMANCY.....

I just can't rid, this unholy craving.
May I exchange a Nightmare for a Dream?
Your silent lips, once sealed an Eternal tryst.
It's the moistness that I miss.

May I exchange a Nightmare for a Dream?
I can't control this odd obsession.
It's the moistness that I miss.
There is no pennance for this obscene confession.

I can't control this odd obsession.
Who composed this Dance Macabre?
There is no pennance for this obscene confession.
Your heart is mine forever, My heart forever true!

Who composed this Dance Macabre?
What compels this odious devotion?
Your heart is mine forever, My heart forever true!
But never again will your lips whisper...Darling, I Love You.

What compels this odious devotion?
Your silent lips, once sealed  an Eternal tryst.
But never again will your lips whisper...Darling, I Love You.
I just can't rid.....This unholy craving!!!



This poetic form is called a Pantoum...
The modern pantoum is written in interlocking quatrains in which
lines 2 and 4 of one stanza, are used as lines 1 and 3 of the next.
The poem can go on and on, and is usually resolved at the end by
picking up lines 3 and 1 from the FIRST stanza, as lines 2 and 4 of the last.
Thus closing the circle of the poem!
I'll be glad when all this creepy shit is over, so I can revert back to being silly!


13 comments:

Secret Agent Woman said...

Ya know, you aren't actually required to do creepy shit.

Secret Agent Woman said...

Wordrop!

GAB said...

Hummm...ok creepy lol But I like it

G-Man said...

Doc....?
Halloween?
:-)

Gabby...Thanks...:-)

Cloudia said...

what an intricate project for such a fun season



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Mona said...

its like taking a back step, to gain momentum for further thrust.I India, some people actually talk like that!

the walking man said...

who would have known that you had a secret on ice? Though it's only creepy while you're...well no it's creepy just thinking about it. You don't keep your lover where you store your food do you because that would put a whole twist on all of your cooking posts.

GAB said...

YAY your back Im mean I'm back! welcome back to both of us! you can finally read my post again and I am posting again!

Margaret said...

You are a master at romantically creepy! LOVE this treat of a poem....

Craig said...

OK, I'm thinking Last Tango In Paris. . .

But, uh. . . what the Agent Woman said. . .

Brian Miller said...

man you are putting me to shame with your form work man....really great job on the pantoum....creepy as all get out as well....nice one pops...

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