( approaching his target...)
There's something about steel.
The gun is cowardly and boring.
( buries the blade )
For one luxurious moment from puncture to twist...
You and the victim are ONE!
The gasp
The gush
That earthy sanguine scent
That pallid surprised stare
Silence...
In spite of his turgid erection, he slinks off .
Compulsion...Momentarily slaked!!
If you or anyone you know, has stabbed someone or written a Friday Flash 55
Please come tell The G-Man
I will visit, read, enjoy, comment....Then BOOK!!
So from the most turgid host from coast to coast
Have a Kick Ass Week-End!!!
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Chilling! It's almost like you know a bit too much about the subject. Mine is up.
http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2012/10/25/the-world-between/
yikes, you are an original G!
Warm Aloha from Honolulu
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Stabbed someone? Does it have to have been with a knife? :D
Mine is up
Oh... I was afraid this was going to be in first person... so glad you used the pronouns "his" & "he". Cripes Almighty this was scary.
Here is my .... unscary 55.
One Day
Okay, that's just creepy.
Sometimes I wonder about you...
Mostly I just try to stay on your good side.
Thanks for another Friday 55!
Mine's here. :)
yeef, that's gruesome but quite an image you conjure in just 55 words!
What Janna said! Blech! Here's a little trick or treat from me.
Ouch. That's what you call up close and personal.
termitesofsin.blogspot.com
there is something a bit more intimate in sliding the knife into someone...bit of an oddball getting his rocks off on it...errr....
Gads zooks Gman that was sommmthinnn,
I almost choked on my popcorn!
http://izzy-conversing.blogspot.com/2012/10/ff55102612-mouse-and-rat-eater.html
Too many horror movies this Halloween season, G-Man?
Here's mine: Abandoned
Cutting 55, my friend, not to mention sick and twisted. Of course, I loved it.
Okay, I have managed to get my slightly less scary but more puzzling one up tonight, despite all odds. We are both, seemingly, into the knives. Will make the rounds tomorrow.
Your friend,
Moonbat
Juggling Knives on a Unicycle
OMG having witnessed that I now need my 55!
wow, superbly told, g-man! but me-thinks i'll slink into the weekend instead, have a good one!!!!!
Reading this,makes me worry about you....LOL..LOVE IT, great scary stuff. YOU ROCK the 55 out of me!! Mine is here
Have you a TRULY BLESSED WEEKEND!!!
hugs
shakira
Cool we both mentioned hard ons Must be an old goats moon.
ok, you scared me enough.
smiles.
mine is up.
Oh yeah and we both had a fantasy about poking someone...damn I must be reading your mind.
Ooh, "slaked"... such an underused word, and so perfectly used here. I am spooked. Eeeked out of my wits. But wishing you a happy weekend as I run from here!!!
flame in the rain
Darn it. I forgot to do a nasty!
Your is... YUCK! LOL
Mine's here:
iPhone Siri
Have a fab weekend Mr G.
Duh !
slashes wrists !
how am i ever supposed to write this good :P ?
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Well written! Very nice, if creepy and turgid. (Love that word.) Guns are for cowards, you've got that right but isn't it scary what a turn-on such moments are for the killer? I have a less creepy one
here
or maybe just as creepy in an underhanded way. TGIF!
I opted for writing words as I don't have the stomach for doing time...because I would get caught. :)
Mine's up. Happy weekend!
Oh, this just feeds my forensic soul. Ummmm, you should go on and on and on...make it a best seller.
Mine is at: http://rnsane.blogspot.in/2012/10/friday-flash-55.html#links.
I'm home in three weeks. Five months is flying by.
Whoa, G-Man! Creepy!
Hi G-man, Yeowch! Genuinely scary.
http://manicddaily.wordpress.com/2012/10/26/plaque-friday-flash-55/
Have a great weekend and happy holiday! k.
Scary! mine is up, not one of my better ones, but posted all the same. Be careful with that knife!
soory took mine down
ah YUCK! lol dont like gory and that sounded almost like you know this personally
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