Tuesday, November 30, 2010

One Shot Wednesday.....


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Droplets of moisture
Appearing for no reason
Mostly in women....
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30 comments:

Everyday Goddess said...

oh i don't know about that! i love you sensitive new age guys! ;)

moondustwriter said...

Well it is the rainy season!!!

Very beautiful haiku Mr. G

Thanks for sharing with One Shot

Moonie smiles

Serena said...

Trust me on this, dahling -- there's ALWAYS a reason, even if it's not immediately perceptible to the male of the species.:)

Millie said...

There's always a reason--it might just be the kleenex commercial, or good news, or bad news, or...

Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/30/two-souls/

forever lost said...

"mostly women" show theirs! I am sure you know, as any sensitive man knows, women love a tender heart...

TALON said...

lol! I'm going to call this "Hormone Haiku", G. Like Millie says, there's always a reason and everyone knows those Hallmark commercials are killers!

hedgewitch said...

Perhaps you've read the Devil's Dictionary?. This could be in it.

Re the tears--other than those obviously caused by living with men, I think it's all that fake sugar we eat and food we give up to pretend we're super models. You'd cry too buddy.

A Daft Scots Lass said...

my moisture flows freely.

Kavita said...

haha! Very sexist, but I gotta admit, it's true!! :))
G, you seem to know us women all too well, eh?!

Okay... so here's an observation:
Droplets of moisture
Appearing on men's brows
Mostly when they lie ;-)

Here's my One Shot!

the walking man said...

Awe Galen c'mon you big ol' bear you can tell us you have wept a few yourself.


You like the challenges and prompts try writing this in the Japanese style of Haiku.

Akelamalu said...

Ah you're mistaken G. There's always a reason for them be it happy or sad. ;)

Brian Miller said...

actually it is healthy to let it flow at times....regardless of your gender...

dustus said...

Well done haiku with carefully chosen words... found "mostly" in women.

Jerry said...

appearances can be deceiving can't they? Nice one G.

Eric Alder said...

Oh, there's always a reason, G-Man... it's just not always shared with us men-folk. Nice One Shot!

Claudia said...

you rock galen! i should start to cry right now - just for fun and to proof you may be right...smiles

S said...

LOL
Whaddya mean for NO reason?
:P

Come visit me, it's my bday.

Aquarius63 said...

Not all woman cry so freely, that is one thing I never allow anyone to see.

As for reason, ignorance can be bliss.

Nice haiku, Mr. Knowitall.

Anita.

Myrna R. said...

Yes, those droplets moisten my eyes often - but always there's a reason.

Really nice haiku.

kkrige said...

Oh you!
sniff
poking fun at the more sensitive sex.
you just don't understand!!
MEN!!!!
;)

(nothing wrong with a shed tear or two though g-man)
Nice OneShot

Monkey Man said...

Love the simplicity.

Caty said...

tears can be happy too! nice haiku ;)

Steve said...

A lot between the lines here; this, ably, shows - up to a point - the protagonist's outlook (or how I imagine his? outlook would be).

PattiKen said...

G-Man writes haiku! Bravo. And so well. of course, I'm not accepting that "for no reason" line. you are way too sensitive for that!

I'm not ignoring you and my favorite Friday activity. Like just keeps getting in the way. Meh. But like Ahnold, I'll be back.

River said...

LOL! for no reason, Ah! I do have disagree with you there are reasons. lol :)
The picture is incredible, beautiful.

Beachanny said...

Loved the image..perhaps the words are true..just makes the girls feel sorry for you. Gay @beachanny

lime said...

there's no shame in a man shedding them. ;)

Pete Marshall said...

top haiku my friend...cheers pete

Shashi said...

Very interesting...

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gautami tripathy said...

no male can know
about no reason-
or about seasons

retrieval