Sunday, August 22, 2010

Micro-Fiction Monday.....


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There wasn't much time left as he searched.
The Curse had begun...
"First your Essense, then your Flesh.
Then your Soul and mine will Mesh!!"
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The lovely Susan over at Stony River, has a weekly short story exercise called Micro-Fiction Monday, compose a poem or Story based on her weekly Picture. It has to be 140 characters or less, including spaces and punctuation. You can find her ... Here!
It's challenging, and it's fun!
See You Tomorrow...Peace!!!

34 comments:

Anonymous said...

Very well done. It's better than Mush I'm sure. Have a great week ahead :)

Anonymous said...

Ooo Yahtzee :)

lime said...

creepy! but well done.

Sylvia K said...

Love the evil touch and creepy is good -- sometimes! I love this one! Enjoy your week!

Sylvia

Maha said...

That was real good. Great job with the touch of evil!

ninotaziz said...

Oooh, doomed he is...scary!

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

very smart and creepy tale,
especially when you made it within 140 characters.

KB said...

G has a dark side :)

Have a great week sweetie.

Mine’s here.

Michael G-G said...

Creepiest poem I've heard in a while... This was a great MM, G-Man. Have a great week.

Anonymous said...

Very dramatic – certainly no rib tickler.
Thanks for another very creative post.

All the best, Boonie

Pat said...

Oooh...This is creepy and cool and it's a POEM!! Great one today, G-Man!

moondustwriter said...

is that the newest diet craze???

G - you have such a way with words

Have a kick-the-can week

Moon *grin*

jabblog said...

Creepy!

MorningAJ said...

Eat your heart out Edgar Allen Poe. Ah. You already did.

Good story!

A Daft Scots Lass said...

awesome!

Deborah said...

Oooh ... I like it!!

Me said...

Nice one! Very creepy, and well-told MM. :)

Akelamalu said...

Ooooh a curse - I like it! ;)

Nessa said...

I won't be able to sleep tonight. Very creepy. *shivers*

Cheryl said...

Great gobs of greasy grimy gopher guts! That's one spooky picture and you done 'er proud with your words.

SouthLakesMom said...

And the kids think Harry Potter cornered the wizard market. HAH!

clean and crazy said...

very well written, you can start a book with this one.

Maude Lynn said...

Nicely done, G-Man!

Scott M. Frey said...

oh yea, that is AWESOME! I love it!

izzy said...

Goodness what a darkish line, getting set for Halloween already? thanks as always for sharing.

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

A Poem, Nice one G Man. I hope his search will lift the curse.

Dianne said...

You can rhyme, and Haiku,
You Edgar-Allen-Poe, you!

Brian Miller said...

dang g-man...you were channeling your inner poe on this one...fabulously wicked!

Jannie Funster said...

Ahhh, that's a cheery one! :)

Stephen King, make way for Galen Hayman!!

xo

secret agent woman said...

That's a little spooky.

Sylvia Morice said...

Once the souls merge, will we end up with a skeleton or a flesh and blood man? Hmmm. Have a great week. Cheers.

Suz said...

Oh that was good
and loved the rhyme
and very clever too

hope said...

Ah, a little magic on Monday....or is that voodoo? :)

septembermom said...

That curse works too fast. Very well done!