The crime appeared random.
She bled out with barely a whimper.
That cheating bitch deserved it!
His perfection made him smile.
No cell phone, no surveillance, no witness.
The bloody evidence was burried miles away.
But SUDDENLY...Panic engulfed him as he glanced toward his wrist, and the pale outline of his missing Timex!!
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If you or anyone you know has written a Friday Flash 55, please come tell The G-Man. I will visit, read, enjoy, comment, Then BOOK!!
So from the most gracious host from coast to coast...
Have a Great Week-End!
Peace...!!!
31 comments:
Very good 55 this week. There is no such thing as a perfect crime. I have tried. LOL
Mine is up. No poignant or pathos this week.
Took a lickin but still tickin...:D
I like the mystery! OK, I'm still thinkin over here...
Oops!!
G-man, you didn't...
;)
--snow
Oops. Now whatcha gonna do genius?
Kinda gruesome there G. The "accidental suicide" in the garage was a lot less messy.
You haven't taken out any large insurance policies lately have you?
55 Flash Fiction Friday #39: Chapter 31 -- Bhaiaa Vaadaa
Just goes to show you there is NO perfect crime...
Was it a crime of passion?
Happy Friday!
You're getting ready to try your hand at writing murder mysteries, aren't you? That's pretty darn good in only 55 words.:)
Oh G, this is a great 55 but the pic looks like you killed a Gingerbread man.
Mine's up, as you know.
Next time just cheat back. :P
Mine will be up at midnight Pacific time as usual :)
G-Man, Oh, the cold, cold heart of your killer! He was almost perfection...almost! :))
Darn, forgot to leave my link...55 FFF
ooo me likey, g. that was very cool :) i'm up. woot!
My hubby has posted his first 55. Go to my site to have a read. Yeah, now we have both posted.
oh shit...... well done! and i've done my 55 55 55 55 55 55.....
Oh love it!!! Miss Scarlett in the Conservatory!!!
My Flash 55 is posted once again. Scroll below the flower photos to find it today.
Happy weekend to you.
Very clever story.
My not so clever story is up.
That watch will be back to haunt you. We dragons know.
Ours is up complete with a flash 55 poem.
Better grab that shovel!
Mine is up.
There is ALWAYS a hitch in the plan isn't there G...reat one?
They always leave some clue...good for the crimes department!
I wrote a 55ve this week Galen!
not so perfect after all. terrific job, i can see his smugness melting away into an expression of guilty terror.
i'm up.
Doing my best Peter Falk impression: "Oh, just one more thing, sir. The evidence guys, they found this watch near the body ..."
My 55 is up too.
ha! Always the Timex . . . keeps on ticking . . . etc.
;-)
A GENERATION’S GRADUATION
Glad you are getting a refund. So am I, believe it or not!
I hope that watch doesnt turn up in a pool of blood somewhere.
Have a good weekend, Gman!
Can't say the watch was stolen- no one steals a Timex...
I guess that means that the ticking he hears is simply the beating of her tell-tale heart.
My 55 is up.
Haha he's snookered! Good one m'dear. :)
Mine's up.
Tick Tock Clarice. Very nicely done G. Mine is up and I hope you have a fantabulous weekend.
Is there a list somewhere of all the blogs with flash 55's . It is so time consuming to have to keep digging them out of the comments.
You need to share this with James Goodman. He could use it on his Darwednesday post.
Good one!
Mine's up. D
PS I can bathe in a 5 gallon bucket. I am miniature, dontcha know.
Galen, your 55ves are agin doing the disappearing act on me!!!
(((HUGS))) for the sweetest comment on my 55ve!
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