Thursday, April 2, 2009

Friday Flash 55.....




The crime appeared random.
She bled out with barely a whimper.
That cheating bitch deserved it!
His perfection made him smile.
No cell phone, no surveillance, no witness.
The bloody evidence was burried miles away.
But SUDDENLY...Panic engulfed him as he glanced toward his wrist, and the pale outline of his missing Timex!!

.

If you or anyone you know has written a Friday Flash 55, please come tell The G-Man. I will visit, read, enjoy, comment, Then BOOK!!
So from the most gracious host from coast to coast...
Have a Great Week-End!
Peace...!!!

33 comments:

myrtle beached whale said...

Very good 55 this week. There is no such thing as a perfect crime. I have tried. LOL
Mine is up. No poignant or pathos this week.

Lulda Casadaga said...

Took a lickin but still tickin...:D
I like the mystery! OK, I'm still thinkin over here...

snowelf said...

Oops!!

G-man, you didn't...

;)


--snow

Mojo said...

Oops. Now whatcha gonna do genius?

Kinda gruesome there G. The "accidental suicide" in the garage was a lot less messy.

You haven't taken out any large insurance policies lately have you?

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jillie said...

Just goes to show you there is NO perfect crime...

Was it a crime of passion?

Happy Friday!

Serena said...

You're getting ready to try your hand at writing murder mysteries, aren't you? That's pretty darn good in only 55 words.:)

KB said...

Oh G, this is a great 55 but the pic looks like you killed a Gingerbread man.

Mine's up, as you know.

MomsJournal said...

Next time just cheat back. :P

Mine will be up at midnight Pacific time as usual :)

Eaton Bennett said...

G-Man, Oh, the cold, cold heart of your killer! He was almost perfection...almost! :))

Eaton Bennett said...

Darn, forgot to leave my link...55 FFF

ciara said...

ooo me likey, g. that was very cool :) i'm up. woot!

KB said...

My hubby has posted his first 55. Go to my site to have a read. Yeah, now we have both posted.

Shadow said...

oh shit...... well done! and i've done my 55 55 55 55 55 55.....

Hootin' Anni said...

Oh love it!!! Miss Scarlett in the Conservatory!!!


My Flash 55 is posted once again. Scroll below the flower photos to find it today.

Happy weekend to you.

Dr.John said...

Very clever story.
My not so clever story is up.

Fandango said...

That watch will be back to haunt you. We dragons know.
Ours is up complete with a flash 55 poem.

Mama Zen said...

Better grab that shovel!

Mine is up.

the walking man said...

There is ALWAYS a hitch in the plan isn't there G...reat one?

Mona said...

They always leave some clue...good for the crimes department!

I wrote a 55ve this week Galen!

lime said...

not so perfect after all. terrific job, i can see his smugness melting away into an expression of guilty terror.

i'm up.

Devotee said...

Doing my best Peter Falk impression: "Oh, just one more thing, sir. The evidence guys, they found this watch near the body ..."

My 55 is up too.

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

ha! Always the Timex . . . keeps on ticking . . . etc.

;-)

A GENERATION’S GRADUATION

S said...

Glad you are getting a refund. So am I, believe it or not!

I hope that watch doesnt turn up in a pool of blood somewhere.

Have a good weekend, Gman!

buffalodick said...

Can't say the watch was stolen- no one steals a Timex...

Mary said...

I guess that means that the ticking he hears is simply the beating of her tell-tale heart.

My 55 is up.

Akelamalu said...

Haha he's snookered! Good one m'dear. :)

Mine's up.

jadey said...

Tick Tock Clarice. Very nicely done G. Mine is up and I hope you have a fantabulous weekend.

Dr.John said...

Is there a list somewhere of all the blogs with flash 55's . It is so time consuming to have to keep digging them out of the comments.

Donnetta Lee said...

You need to share this with James Goodman. He could use it on his Darwednesday post.

Good one!

Mine's up. D

S said...

PS I can bathe in a 5 gallon bucket. I am miniature, dontcha know.

Mona said...

Galen, your 55ves are agin doing the disappearing act on me!!!

(((HUGS))) for the sweetest comment on my 55ve!

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