Thursday, October 23, 2008

D.O.A...55...............

I remember...We were flying low,
and hit something in the air.
The girl...Is laying there beside me,
and on her face is such a distant stare.
Liquid warmth, is flowing from my body.
Life is oozing out, with my blood.
The attendant kneels down and whispers softly,
"Sorry, there's no chance for you...."
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If you or anyone you know has written a Friday Flash 55, please come tell the G-Man. I will visit, read, enjoy, comment ...then BOOK!!!
Special thanks to Jim Rutelidge for helping inspire this morbid offering.
Have a Spooky Weekend...
Peace...!!!

25 comments:

Serena said...

Ooooo, spooky one. But then, 'tis the season. That reminds me of some morbid old song along the same lines, the name of which escapes me. Wishing you a spooky weekend, too.:)

Devotee said...

Wow, I hadn't even thought of that song in ten or fifteen years. I may have to buy the album off of amazon.

Thanks for the reminder, g-man!

smarmoofus said...

Song? This is reminiscent of a song? Either way, I love the imagery, G. Great job!

-smarmoofus

Kaknu said...

oohh morbid, I like it! Awesome 55 G-man. ;-)

ciara said...

yikes. well, fits this time of yr, i guess. LOL i'm up...early, too. w00t! holla! lmao

KB said...

Oh me likey. Mine's up

Mojo said...

Bloodrock! Who remembers them? And Serena, the song was called "DOA". Haven't heard that song in ages.

Mine actually published last night, but I was dead asleep when it did. Too many late nights editing photos (or taking them) this week. But never fear...

55 Flash Fiction Friday #17: Yaadein (I)

Mojo said...

PS: I think I have an MP3 of that song around here somewhere... Pretty sure of it actually...

KJ said...

Have a fantastic weekend!!!!

Mojo said...

Yup... I was right. I do have it.

James Goodman said...

OH! That is a great 55, Galen. I actually had a chance to participate this week as well. :D

lime said...

yikes. sounds like something a different james we know might write! good one though , gman, very clear images there.

Liquid said...

Boooooooooooooooooo!

That is one serious 55!
Mine's up.

Have a bloodless weekend, dear Sir!

Mona said...

This is more sad than spooky to me. It somehow exudes a kind of helpless pain. I like the pun in the last sentence. It is loaded!

My simple 55ve is up!

barman said...

I think this can fit in nicely with this time of year. It feels almost halloweenish to me in ways. Nice changeup G.

buffalodick said...

Gaaaa! Good one for the season of the Witch...

Polt said...

Spooky inDEED!

I've played, a bit late, but played nonetheless.

HUGS...

Sarah said...

That was sad and shit..

BTW. I've seen your house...

Akelamalu said...

That's a song? How sad. :(

Mine's up

Queenie said...

Sniff, sniff, now look what you've done!!!!!

Lulda Casadaga said...

getting into the spirit I see...ohh
Trick or Treat! ;)

I got my 55 up...have a great weekend!

Donnetta Lee said...

Well, that gives me the creeps. Good time for it, huh! Nice, Galen. I also like the recipe below. May have to try that. What oven setting?

Okay. Mine is up!! Donnetta

Sarah said...

You know you like it..

SO DONT COMPLAIN BIZATCH!

G-Man said...

Thanks everyone that either visited or played on Friday...
Y'all Rock!!!

Devotee said...

My 55 from Friday is up. Apparently I botched the comment where I linked to it ... sorry!