Saturday, November 5, 2011

Sunday 160.....




(Translated from French)
I'm still alive!!
I'm still alive!!
God help me Please!
I can't feel my legs!
I can't feel my arms!
I can't feel my body!
The crowd is cheering.
They hate me
They hate me...
Bless me Father for I have sinned...
(Fade to black...)

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only 160 Characters? Yes? Then post it on your
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16 comments:

  1. secret agent womanNovember 5, 2011 at 10:04:00 PM EDT

    Yikes!

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  2. secret agent womanNovember 5, 2011 at 10:04:00 PM EDT

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  3. secret agent womanNovember 5, 2011 at 10:04:00 PM EDT

    Imaginiff!

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  4. Brian MillerNovember 5, 2011 at 10:39:00 PM EDT

    cut the head off the snake, but watch out it can still bite you for a bit...

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  5. Ann (bunnygirl)November 5, 2011 at 11:03:00 PM EDT

    I've often wondered....

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  6. Monkey ManNovember 5, 2011 at 11:05:00 PM EDT

    That's one long dying breath. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.

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  7. AnonymousNovember 6, 2011 at 3:49:00 AM EST

    Nice one! They say headless chickend run around for a while so why not...
    Jamie

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  8. izzyNovember 6, 2011 at 7:38:00 AM EST

    My My, such an interesting take!
    Very clever- Thanks!

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  9. PattiKenNovember 6, 2011 at 10:10:00 AM EST

    Argh, gruesome. On the other hand, he probably had it coming.

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  10. MorningAJNovember 6, 2011 at 12:01:00 PM EST

    Urgh! Gruesome!

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  11. AkelamaluNovember 6, 2011 at 1:35:00 PM EST

    If you can keep your head when all about you are losing theirs...... ooops too late! ;)

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  12. limeNovember 6, 2011 at 1:50:00 PM EST

    yikes!

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  13. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallNovember 6, 2011 at 4:12:00 PM EST

    A bold and powerful 160.
    Enjoyed the sentiments.

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  14. Maude LynnNovember 6, 2011 at 6:01:00 PM EST

    This is the funniest damn thing ever!

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  15. G-ManNovember 6, 2011 at 6:22:00 PM EST

    Mama Zen...
    It twernt supposed to be Funny!
    Unless you are a Necrophile....

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  16. CraigNovember 7, 2011 at 2:13:00 PM EST

    Very evocative. . .

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