Saturday, October 22, 2011

Sunday 160...




Like the Sun on the trees you learned to love me.
Like a leaf on a breeze you blew away.
The birds fly South against the Darkened sky.
My life will be forever Autumn.
Cause you're not here...


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19 comments:

  1. Brian MillerOctober 22, 2011 at 11:14:00 PM EDT

    wow getting a little poetic there pops...feel the loss and longing...i rather like autumn...

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  2. Monkey ManOctober 22, 2011 at 11:29:00 PM EDT

    That is so sweet and heartfelt. We both got struck by the Autumn sky today. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160, G.

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  3. Maude LynnOctober 22, 2011 at 11:48:00 PM EDT

    That's really lovely, G-Man!

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  4. A Daft Scots LassOctober 23, 2011 at 2:23:00 AM EDT

    Such sweet words.

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  5. AnonymousOctober 23, 2011 at 3:46:00 AM EDT

    Whoa - a touch of the Justin Hayward's here? Very lyrical!

    Jamie

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  6. Ofira SephirothOctober 23, 2011 at 4:06:00 AM EDT

    That's very beautiful.

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  7. secret agent womanOctober 23, 2011 at 6:53:00 AM EDT

    Well, that's a melancholy start to a Sunday! :(

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  8. izzyOctober 23, 2011 at 8:13:00 AM EDT

    I really like straightforward feelings. They don't have to be ironed flat- Just is refreshing.
    Thanks.

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  9. limeOctober 23, 2011 at 9:45:00 AM EDT

    wistful and yearning. it makes that picture look so much more haunting.

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  10. MorningAJOctober 23, 2011 at 10:05:00 AM EDT

    Cheat! I know someone with that for a ring tone.

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  11. Alice AudreyOctober 23, 2011 at 12:31:00 PM EDT

    So sad, G-man.

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  12. MijayamiOctober 23, 2011 at 12:34:00 PM EDT

    Sad yet beautiful. Nicely done.

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  13. HelenOctober 23, 2011 at 12:44:00 PM EDT

    Awwwwww, who knew you had such a sweet side, G-Man?

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  14. Enchanted OakOctober 23, 2011 at 5:12:00 PM EDT

    This was beautiful. I'm proud of you.

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  15. Ann (bunnygirl)October 23, 2011 at 5:35:00 PM EDT

    What a sad sentiment. Ultimately we all move on in one way or another.

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  16. BubbaOctober 24, 2011 at 10:30:00 AM EDT

    Look at G-Man, getting his poet on!

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  17. Jannie FunsterOctober 25, 2011 at 11:15:00 AM EDT

    Oh, Galen, I love your sensitive side.

    Autumn, autumn, the saddest season.

    xoxo

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  18. generic cialisDecember 12, 2011 at 11:56:00 AM EST

    Fabulous poem. I think is impossible not to fall in love when a person dedicate this to you... don't you think?

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  19. generic cialisDecember 12, 2011 at 11:56:00 AM EST

    Fabulous poem. I think is impossible not to fall in love when a person dedicate this to you... don't you think?

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