Tuesday, September 7, 2010

One Shot Wednesday....


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I Sense Your Presence....
When I SMELL Lavender.
FEEL a warm gentle Rain.
SEE a Romantic Moon.
HEAR a Lover's refrain.
But my arms are now empty, and the one sense I miss.
My Raison d'Etre...
The TASTE of Your Kiss.
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Hosts a day for people to show their stuff called One Shot Wednesday!
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30 comments:

  1. MeSeptember 7, 2010 at 8:12:00 PM EDT

    *swoon*

    :)

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2010 at 8:46:00 PM EDT

    Good stuff. I sure dont have you pictured as a poet though.

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  3. Brian MillerSeptember 7, 2010 at 8:56:00 PM EDT

    hot stuff G! the taste of your kiss...so sensual...i imagine me wont be the only one swooning....

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  4. SerenaSeptember 7, 2010 at 9:50:00 PM EDT

    What a lovely glimpse of your tender side, G.;)

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  5. MillieSeptember 7, 2010 at 9:52:00 PM EDT

    What a sense-ational poem! This is great!

    Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/09/07/bling/

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  6. TALONSeptember 7, 2010 at 9:54:00 PM EDT

    A poem for all the senses. This made me go "Awwww!" and I loved it.

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  7. KBSeptember 7, 2010 at 9:54:00 PM EDT

    This is beautiful G. Mine's up!

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  8. CloudiaSeptember 7, 2010 at 10:03:00 PM EDT

    Hot!





    Aloha from Waikiki

    Comfort Spiral

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  9. Ben LanghinrichsSeptember 7, 2010 at 10:46:00 PM EDT

    Nice use of all the senses. Fun poem. If you get a chance, come on over and read my poem, The Haven, which also uses the senses, but in a quite different (and possibly more senseless) way. Love to know what you think.

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  10. Jannie FunsterSeptember 7, 2010 at 11:46:00 PM EDT

    Funny, but yesterday when I was cleaning out a "hell hole" in the house I found a little purple silk pillow filled with lavendar and something else nice I can't quite put my finger on. I was ready just to toss it, thinking it would not hold any more scent 2 years down the road. But it's still wonderful!

    Smells, tastes we love -- what blessings.

    xo

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  11. steveroniSeptember 8, 2010 at 12:05:00 AM EDT

    Mr G...this is really nice, but I just do not hear YOU reciting these words...or even WRITING them. But good...GOOD!

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  12. BeachannySeptember 8, 2010 at 1:05:00 AM EDT

    I read somewhere that the two scents that turn men on the most are pumpkin (cooking as in pumpkin pies) and lavender. Clearly whomever can bottle these will make a fortune. This is a great sensual piece. Thanks for sharing. Gay (beachanny)

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  13. One Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and ArtistsSeptember 8, 2010 at 1:06:00 AM EDT

    you know whenever the moon is in a poem I smile.

    I think the moon from the beginning of time has had that romantic effect on lovers

    Nice One Shot

    Moon smiles

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  14. MonaSeptember 8, 2010 at 1:47:00 AM EDT

    Great little poem :)

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  15. BubbaSeptember 8, 2010 at 6:10:00 AM EDT

    G-Man, you ol' romantic devil you! No wonder the ladies swoon over you. (I'm so jealous!) Nice work!

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  16. NessaSeptember 8, 2010 at 6:46:00 AM EDT

    Very romantic and hot and it reads like a song. Lovely.

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  17. AkelamaluSeptember 8, 2010 at 8:23:00 AM EDT

    Well, well, you old romantic you!

    The kisses in old films used to be so chaste didn't they? Tight lips and no tongues! ;)

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  18. GlynnSeptember 8, 2010 at 8:30:00 AM EDT

    I felt a swoon coming on, so I grabbed the lavender smelling salts. Mistake.

    Nice one.

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  19. Dulçe ♥September 8, 2010 at 9:17:00 AM EDT

    Hey
    So you are a romantic as well

    Lovely G Man!

    ;)
    Dulce

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  20. SuziCateSeptember 8, 2010 at 9:59:00 AM EDT

    ooooh, lavender and a warm gentle rain...how romantic!

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  21. JessieSeptember 8, 2010 at 11:51:00 AM EDT

    very nice Mr. G-Man. i guess maybe you're not as tough as you look. there's a romantic side hiding out...
    glad you let him out. this was really sweet.

    warm smiles,

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  22. dustusSeptember 8, 2010 at 2:36:00 PM EDT

    All senses are fired up in this poem, G-Man. Great romantic lines. Says so much in few words.

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  23. ClaudiaSeptember 8, 2010 at 2:45:00 PM EDT

    feel, see, hear, smell - still not complete without the taste of her kiss
    you seem to be romantic - i wouldn't have thought this - but yeah - nice!

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  24. PattiKenSeptember 8, 2010 at 6:44:00 PM EDT

    Wow. G-Man taps into his romantic side. Who knew? ;-)

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  25. UnknownSeptember 8, 2010 at 9:25:00 PM EDT

    OH MY!!! I just wrote a poem on similar lines... and now I read this!! But I will be posting mine only tomorrow.. will DEFINITELY leave another comment here with a link to my poem once I post it, so you can see what I meant when I said "similar" :)

    Loved your poem, G... it's sad, but beautiful! How the senses crave for that love... (sigh)
    It's amazing how we thought about this kinda together.... brr...very scary!

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  26. limeSeptember 8, 2010 at 10:49:00 PM EDT

    well now that's just plain lovely and so full of longing...

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  27. MarshySeptember 9, 2010 at 10:59:00 AM EDT

    wow....i can so understand that...at times i think back and i can see and smell it all but the touch is no longer there...great poem..cheers pete

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  28. Katherine KrigeSeptember 9, 2010 at 10:41:00 PM EDT

    got another Awww... from me G.
    nice, sweet poem

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  29. secret agent womanSeptember 10, 2010 at 11:24:00 PM EDT

    There's noting quite like a wonderful kiss.

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  30. joannaSeptember 11, 2010 at 1:40:00 AM EDT

    WOW

    My favorite kind of mixture lavender, warm rain and the taste lingering after his kiss.

    You are heating up the blog waves, my blog friend, KEEP writing.

    Joanny

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