Sunday, August 22, 2010

Micro-Fiction Monday.....


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There wasn't much time left as he searched.
The Curse had begun...
"First your Essense, then your Flesh.
Then your Soul and mine will Mesh!!"
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The lovely Susan over at Stony River, has a weekly short story exercise called Micro-Fiction Monday, compose a poem or Story based on her weekly Picture. It has to be 140 characters or less, including spaces and punctuation. You can find her ... Here!
It's challenging, and it's fun!
See You Tomorrow...Peace!!!
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34 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 22, 2010 at 10:02:00 PM EDT

    Very well done. It's better than Mush I'm sure. Have a great week ahead :)

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  2. AnonymousAugust 22, 2010 at 10:02:00 PM EDT

    Ooo Yahtzee :)

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  3. limeAugust 22, 2010 at 10:07:00 PM EDT

    creepy! but well done.

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  4. Sylvia KAugust 22, 2010 at 10:54:00 PM EDT

    Love the evil touch and creepy is good -- sometimes! I love this one! Enjoy your week!

    Sylvia

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  5. MahaAugust 22, 2010 at 11:12:00 PM EDT

    That was real good. Great job with the touch of evil!

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  6. ninotazizAugust 22, 2010 at 11:15:00 PM EDT

    Oooh, doomed he is...scary!

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  7. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallAugust 22, 2010 at 11:32:00 PM EDT

    very smart and creepy tale,
    especially when you made it within 140 characters.

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  8. KBAugust 22, 2010 at 11:45:00 PM EDT

    G has a dark side :)

    Have a great week sweetie.

    Mine’s here.

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  9. Michael G-GAugust 23, 2010 at 12:50:00 AM EDT

    Creepiest poem I've heard in a while... This was a great MM, G-Man. Have a great week.

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  10. AnonymousAugust 23, 2010 at 12:56:00 AM EDT

    Very dramatic – certainly no rib tickler.
    Thanks for another very creative post.

    All the best, Boonie

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  11. PatAugust 23, 2010 at 1:09:00 AM EDT

    Oooh...This is creepy and cool and it's a POEM!! Great one today, G-Man!

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  12. moondustwriterAugust 23, 2010 at 1:24:00 AM EDT

    is that the newest diet craze???

    G - you have such a way with words

    Have a kick-the-can week

    Moon *grin*

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  13. jabblogAugust 23, 2010 at 2:34:00 AM EDT

    Creepy!

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  14. MorningAJAugust 23, 2010 at 3:47:00 AM EDT

    Eat your heart out Edgar Allen Poe. Ah. You already did.

    Good story!

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  15. A Daft Scots LassAugust 23, 2010 at 4:14:00 AM EDT

    awesome!

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  16. DeborahAugust 23, 2010 at 4:25:00 AM EDT

    Oooh ... I like it!!

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  17. MeAugust 23, 2010 at 5:57:00 AM EDT

    Nice one! Very creepy, and well-told MM. :)

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  18. AkelamaluAugust 23, 2010 at 6:15:00 AM EDT

    Ooooh a curse - I like it! ;)

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  19. NessaAugust 23, 2010 at 6:26:00 AM EDT

    I won't be able to sleep tonight. Very creepy. *shivers*

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  20. CherylAugust 23, 2010 at 6:53:00 AM EDT

    Great gobs of greasy grimy gopher guts! That's one spooky picture and you done 'er proud with your words.

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  21. SouthLakesMomAugust 23, 2010 at 8:15:00 AM EDT

    And the kids think Harry Potter cornered the wizard market. HAH!

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  22. clean and crazyAugust 23, 2010 at 8:29:00 AM EDT

    very well written, you can start a book with this one.

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  23. Maude LynnAugust 23, 2010 at 9:16:00 AM EDT

    Nicely done, G-Man!

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  24. Scott M. FreyAugust 23, 2010 at 9:35:00 AM EDT

    oh yea, that is AWESOME! I love it!

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  25. izzyAugust 23, 2010 at 10:01:00 AM EDT

    Goodness what a darkish line, getting set for Halloween already? thanks as always for sharing.

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  26. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}August 23, 2010 at 10:13:00 AM EDT

    A Poem, Nice one G Man. I hope his search will lift the curse.

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  27. DianneAugust 23, 2010 at 11:17:00 AM EDT

    You can rhyme, and Haiku,
    You Edgar-Allen-Poe, you!

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  28. Brian MillerAugust 23, 2010 at 11:52:00 AM EDT

    dang g-man...you were channeling your inner poe on this one...fabulously wicked!

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  29. Jannie FunsterAugust 23, 2010 at 12:45:00 PM EDT

    Ahhh, that's a cheery one! :)

    Stephen King, make way for Galen Hayman!!

    xo

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  30. secret agent womanAugust 23, 2010 at 3:13:00 PM EDT

    That's a little spooky.

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  31. Sylvia MoriceAugust 23, 2010 at 3:35:00 PM EDT

    Once the souls merge, will we end up with a skeleton or a flesh and blood man? Hmmm. Have a great week. Cheers.

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  32. SuzAugust 23, 2010 at 4:27:00 PM EDT

    Oh that was good
    and loved the rhyme
    and very clever too

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  33. hopeAugust 23, 2010 at 7:28:00 PM EDT

    Ah, a little magic on Monday....or is that voodoo? :)

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  34. septembermomAugust 23, 2010 at 8:54:00 PM EDT

    That curse works too fast. Very well done!

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