Thursday, July 19, 2007

55 Flash Fiction....FICTION!!!!...(maybe)

To hold her hand
To smell her hair
I need her touch
But she's not there...

I hear her breathe
I her her scream
I hear her laugh
But she's just a dream...

Can you love an illusion?
Will emotions fade?
(..Naw, I don't think so)
I will love her ALWAYS
Till my dying day......
at

44 comments:

  1. SerenaJuly 19, 2007 at 11:17:00 PM EDT

    Wow, G, that is really beautiful. And I guarantee it will evoke the same sentiments in the elusive she.
    xoxbdxox

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  2. barmanJuly 19, 2007 at 11:23:00 PM EDT

    You are talking about a Tim Horton's Coffee, aren't you?

    Very nice indeed Galen.

    Who Hoo ... Serna is #1. I was oh so close.

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  3. G-ManJuly 19, 2007 at 11:27:00 PM EDT

    Hehehe..Serena...?
    Fiction remember??
    Xoxoxbgoxoxoxox

    Barman!!!
    Yeah, Tim Horton's
    ...yet so far.

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  4. GABJuly 19, 2007 at 11:34:00 PM EDT

    Me it must be me! Hugs

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  5. SerenaJuly 19, 2007 at 11:41:00 PM EDT

    Hehehe. Of course.
    xoxbdxox

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  6. SJuly 19, 2007 at 11:56:00 PM EDT

    Oh I love it when you write about me!

    Hahahahaha!

    Very well done sir!

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  7. Snow WhiteJuly 20, 2007 at 12:09:00 AM EDT

    Wow, G-Man... talk about a change of pace! I like it! You ARE the man! xoxoxo

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  8. Little WingJuly 20, 2007 at 12:17:00 AM EDT

    Wow, look at you! In touch with your feelings!
    I will try my hand at my first 55 flash fiction!

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  9. javajazzJuly 20, 2007 at 12:50:00 AM EDT

    oooh mysterious G...
    poet G
    romantic G
    you ARE in touch with your feelings...!
    very sweet...

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  10. G-ManJuly 20, 2007 at 1:11:00 AM EDT

    Gabby....?
    It might be!
    xox

    Yes Serena,
    FICTION!!!
    xobgxo

    Susie...
    The Queen of 55's
    All Bow Before the Mistress!!

    Ahhhhhhh....
    The breathtakingly beautiful...Lady Di.xoxox

    LittleWing,
    Tell me when you post!
    Hopefully, I'll give you my expert opinion.xoxox

    JJ,
    Thank You so much for remaining friends, I hope we get the Brian Riddle solved soon...
    Galen xoxoxo

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  11. MonaJuly 20, 2007 at 1:33:00 AM EDT

    GALEN!!!

    For once! this one did not disappear!!!!

    Beautiful verse...

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  12. MonaJuly 20, 2007 at 1:38:00 AM EDT

    I think most of us can relate to that....

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  13. javajazzJuly 20, 2007 at 1:53:00 AM EDT

    what do you mean for remaining friends?
    was i going to stop?
    sheesh!
    so far Brian's not leaving tomorrow either
    and we might be up to around 6000 dollars
    in lawyers fees...just to get him across the
    border appropriately...charming.
    thanks sweet pea...xoxo

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  14. AnonymousJuly 20, 2007 at 7:05:00 AM EDT

    wow, that's really beautiful.
    You are something dude.
    Great writing.
    tc

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  15. G-ManJuly 20, 2007 at 7:27:00 AM EDT

    Mona,
    Thanks for relating..
    xoxmroxoxoxox

    Lisa,
    Thats not what I meant, but thanks, and I hope it gets resolved soon.
    Lots of love..Galen xox

    Thanks TC,
    I love the 55..
    Have a great week-end.
    Galen.

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  16. Cha ChaJuly 20, 2007 at 9:09:00 AM EDT

    Awwwwww....

    You are such a tease.

    It's a good thing.

    This one's great, G.

    As are they all.

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  17. CharlesJuly 20, 2007 at 9:12:00 AM EDT

    Dang, and I thought the G was a manly man. ;)

    I can relate to those feeling towards coffee, but is the pronoun "her" appropriate for coffee named "Tim Horton's?"

    Did you read my last message on your last post?

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  18. snowelfJuly 20, 2007 at 9:17:00 AM EDT

    Aaaww....Galen...so sweet!!

    --snow

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  19. SignGurlJuly 20, 2007 at 9:35:00 AM EDT

    You know that every woman that reads that is going to think it's about her? I know you knew this.

    It's very beautiful.

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  20. FlashJuly 20, 2007 at 11:09:00 AM EDT

    A 55FFF poem! Fantastic!

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  21. MonaJuly 20, 2007 at 1:06:00 PM EDT

    YAY! Sign Gurl! how true!!
    Galen does not love just some woman, he loves WOMANKIND!

    Yayyy!! Galen!!! Three Cheers!

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  22. MonaJuly 20, 2007 at 1:07:00 PM EDT

    GALEN!...I think someone is impersonating you on other blogs! I think you shud put in a complaint at bloggers!

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  23. Melodie Norman HaasJuly 20, 2007 at 1:42:00 PM EDT

    Always luv your flash fictions, mine was not fiction today but hey it was a post! Hooray :)

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  24. snowelfJuly 20, 2007 at 3:11:00 PM EDT

    Galen, I did put in a complaint, but they wrote me back and said there was nothing they could do...

    --snow

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  25. Cazzie!!!July 20, 2007 at 6:54:00 PM EDT

    This has to be put into a Hallmark card Galen..you made me well up here mate!

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  26. SignGurlJuly 20, 2007 at 7:33:00 PM EDT

    The blog police are here.

     *looks around*

    What's going on?

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  27. G-ManJuly 20, 2007 at 8:07:00 PM EDT

    Hi Strumpet,
    I'm a tease?
    Thanks...xoxoxox

    Charles My Man, I did indeed. Thanks for the heads up. I do not know what possess's some folks, maybe they have too much time on their hands eh?

    SnowElf Thanks,
    I read yours already, you Rock Mama!!
    xoxoxo

    Jenn....?
    Whatever do you mean?
    I know that I will love you always..xoxoxox

    Flash,
    Thanks brother,
    I'll have to see if you continued your smoking gun series...

    Mona...?
    What blogs?
    I wanna go see!!!

    Mona.....?
    FICTION!!!
    xomrxoxoxxo

    Awww, Snow thats soo sweet of you, thanks for looking after the G-Man.
    xox

    Hi Melodie!!!
    Glad you are back semi-blogging again sweetie
    xox

    Ooops, Cazzie,
    I gotta go get my History lesson!!
    Thanks baby..xox

    Jenn....
    Handcuff me please!!!

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  28. MonaJuly 20, 2007 at 8:45:00 PM EDT

    that was a typo oops!
    its other blog...snowelf's

    I hope it does not gravitate to other's

    Someone is after you Galen! EEEKS! I hope it is not so...

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  29. MonaJuly 21, 2007 at 6:29:00 AM EDT

    Ok Ok.. Fiction FICTION!!!

    so let me re phrase :

    Suppose if hypothetically this was not a fiction then Perhaps Galen must have been a lover of Woman kind... of course HYPOTHETICALLY!

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  30. G-ManJuly 21, 2007 at 7:35:00 AM EDT

    Yes Mona.
    Lover of all woman kind.
    xomrxoxo

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  31. Snow WhiteJuly 21, 2007 at 8:19:00 AM EDT

    Have a great Saturday, G-Man! xoxox

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  32. MonaJuly 21, 2007 at 8:23:00 AM EDT

    GALEN! thanks for that utterly wonderful xomrxoxox!!!

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  33. Cha ChaJuly 21, 2007 at 8:28:00 AM EDT

    I'm in line after Galen for the handcuff action with Lube Gir...I mean Signgurl.

    I LOVE that picture.

    Love, love, LOVE!

    As in I adore it so and think it rocks and would post it everywhere possible if it were me in it.

    I am quite jealous.

    Hot stuff.

    And, yes, I am proud to say that my Astroglide is right here next to me on my coffee table.

    Right where it always is.

    Granted, I live alone and don't entertain much...so I can get away with this.

    But, I'm pretty sure that even if that weren't the case, it would be there anyway.

    Rock on with your lubed-up self!

    Woo!

    Lube!

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  34. SignGurlJuly 21, 2007 at 10:51:00 AM EDT

    Strumpet, you must not get me all worked up this early in the morning! I got my handcuffs ready for G and you are next!

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  35. SJuly 21, 2007 at 11:22:00 AM EDT

    Mr Gman
    When you are the host of 55, you can rebel too.
    If youmake a 55 with 66 words, I will not mind.

    :P

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  36. CrabbyJuly 21, 2007 at 11:46:00 AM EDT

    Barman, you KNOW he's talking to Hortons. LOL! No question.

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  37. G-ManJuly 21, 2007 at 1:54:00 PM EDT

    Girls
    Girls...Handcuffs?
    Where do I sign up?

    Susie.....?
    Yeah I never thought of that..hahahahaha...
    maybe I will...xoxox

    Crabby,
    Yes I'll admit it..
    I'll always love Tim Horton's..xoxoxox

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  38. Cha ChaJuly 21, 2007 at 3:07:00 PM EDT

    I'm so excited we don't even need lube.

    Wait, we can use 66 words?

    Ugh!

    If I only knew!

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  39. jillieJuly 21, 2007 at 3:28:00 PM EDT

    That is really a beautiful 55!!!

    Hey thanks for the heads up too. I emailed Autumn.

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  40. G-ManJuly 21, 2007 at 3:54:00 PM EDT

    No Strumpet..
    It's not 66 words..55!!
    But who's counting?

    And besides, no one's ever going to question a Juicy Girl like you...
    Jenn had to get you going didn't she?

    Hi Jillie Bean,
    No problemo Baby..xoxox
    Thanks.

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  41. Cha ChaJuly 21, 2007 at 8:17:00 PM EDT

    I'm counting.

    You know how anal I am.

    But, I only count my own.

    Oh.

    And I like it when you call me Juicy Girl.

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  42. G-ManJuly 21, 2007 at 11:02:00 PM EDT

    Juicy Girl,
    Juicy Girl
    Juicy Girl.....
    Yeah You Like That???


    ..Oh, I can't be forceful to you sweetie, I'm sorry I'm such a wuss when it comes to you...xoxoxox

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  43. MonaJuly 22, 2007 at 1:34:00 AM EDT

    GALEN!!! IT IS DISAPPEARING AGAIN!!!

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  44. limeJuly 23, 2007 at 11:21:00 PM EDT

    awww, you've gone all mushy and romantic on us now.....sweet, gman. still as well done as ever.

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