Thursday, October 23, 2008

D.O.A...55...............

I remember...We were flying low,
and hit something in the air.
The girl...Is laying there beside me,
and on her face is such a distant stare.
Liquid warmth, is flowing from my body.
Life is oozing out, with my blood.
The attendant kneels down and whispers softly,
"Sorry, there's no chance for you...."
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If you or anyone you know has written a Friday Flash 55, please come tell the G-Man. I will visit, read, enjoy, comment ...then BOOK!!!
Special thanks to Jim Rutelidge for helping inspire this morbid offering.
Have a Spooky Weekend...
Peace...!!!
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25 comments:

  1. SerenaOctober 23, 2008 at 10:00:00 PM EDT

    Ooooo, spooky one. But then, 'tis the season. That reminds me of some morbid old song along the same lines, the name of which escapes me. Wishing you a spooky weekend, too.:)

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  2. DevoteeOctober 23, 2008 at 10:14:00 PM EDT

    Wow, I hadn't even thought of that song in ten or fifteen years. I may have to buy the album off of amazon.

    Thanks for the reminder, g-man!

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  3. smarmoofusOctober 23, 2008 at 10:24:00 PM EDT

    Song? This is reminiscent of a song? Either way, I love the imagery, G. Great job!

    -smarmoofus

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  4. AnonymousOctober 23, 2008 at 11:56:00 PM EDT

    oohh morbid, I like it! Awesome 55 G-man. ;-)

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  5. PamOctober 24, 2008 at 12:30:00 AM EDT

    yikes. well, fits this time of yr, i guess. LOL i'm up...early, too. w00t! holla! lmao

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  6. KBOctober 24, 2008 at 4:26:00 AM EDT

    Oh me likey. Mine's up

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  7. MojoOctober 24, 2008 at 7:35:00 AM EDT

    Bloodrock! Who remembers them? And Serena, the song was called "DOA". Haven't heard that song in ages.

    Mine actually published last night, but I was dead asleep when it did. Too many late nights editing photos (or taking them) this week. But never fear...

    55 Flash Fiction Friday #17: Yaadein (I)

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  8. MojoOctober 24, 2008 at 7:36:00 AM EDT

    PS: I think I have an MP3 of that song around here somewhere... Pretty sure of it actually...

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  9. AnonymousOctober 24, 2008 at 7:41:00 AM EDT

    Have a fantastic weekend!!!!

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  10. MojoOctober 24, 2008 at 7:42:00 AM EDT

    Yup... I was right. I do have it.

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  11. James GoodmanOctober 24, 2008 at 7:57:00 AM EDT

    OH! That is a great 55, Galen. I actually had a chance to participate this week as well. :D

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  12. limeOctober 24, 2008 at 8:31:00 AM EDT

    yikes. sounds like something a different james we know might write! good one though , gman, very clear images there.

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  13. LiquidOctober 24, 2008 at 9:21:00 AM EDT

    Boooooooooooooooooo!

    That is one serious 55!
    Mine's up.

    Have a bloodless weekend, dear Sir!

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  14. MonaOctober 24, 2008 at 9:53:00 AM EDT

    This is more sad than spooky to me. It somehow exudes a kind of helpless pain. I like the pun in the last sentence. It is loaded!

    My simple 55ve is up!

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  15. barmanOctober 24, 2008 at 10:04:00 AM EDT

    I think this can fit in nicely with this time of year. It feels almost halloweenish to me in ways. Nice changeup G.

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  16. buffalodickOctober 24, 2008 at 10:09:00 AM EDT

    Gaaaa! Good one for the season of the Witch...

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  17. PoltOctober 24, 2008 at 11:10:00 AM EDT

    Spooky inDEED!

    I've played, a bit late, but played nonetheless.

    HUGS...

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  18. RoxiOctober 24, 2008 at 11:17:00 AM EDT

    That was sad and shit..

    BTW. I've seen your house...

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  19. AkelamaluOctober 24, 2008 at 1:48:00 PM EDT

    That's a song? How sad. :(

    Mine's up

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  20. QueenieOctober 24, 2008 at 3:35:00 PM EDT

    Sniff, sniff, now look what you've done!!!!!

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  21. Lulda CasadagaOctober 24, 2008 at 3:56:00 PM EDT

    getting into the spirit I see...ohh
    Trick or Treat! ;)

    I got my 55 up...have a great weekend!

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  22. DonnettaOctober 24, 2008 at 7:35:00 PM EDT

    Well, that gives me the creeps. Good time for it, huh! Nice, Galen. I also like the recipe below. May have to try that. What oven setting?

    Okay. Mine is up!! Donnetta

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  23. RoxiOctober 25, 2008 at 9:27:00 AM EDT

    You know you like it..

    SO DONT COMPLAIN BIZATCH!

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  24. G-ManOctober 26, 2008 at 12:56:00 PM EDT

    Thanks everyone that either visited or played on Friday...
    Y'all Rock!!!

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  25. DevoteeOctober 26, 2008 at 4:10:00 PM EDT

    My 55 from Friday is up. Apparently I botched the comment where I linked to it ... sorry!

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